Bougie Apocalypse
I'm finding the story decent so far.
There is one issue, though. You keep switching from first person (I and we) to second person (you). In a story, never use second person. Either use first person or third.
oh, there’s a bunch of clean up to do, but thanks for reading, commenting, and the input
I'm finding the story decent so far.
There is one issue, though. You keep switching from first person (I and we) to second person (you). In a story, never use second person. Either use first person or third.
oh, there’s a bunch of clean up to do, but thanks for reading, commenting, and the input